Hallo,
wir müssen in der nächsten Englisch-Klausur eine kleine Erörterung zu irgendeinem Thema schreiben. Da gehts nicht primär um eine wirklich gute Argumentation, mit Behauptung, Begründung und Beispiel, so wie wir das aus dem Fach Deutsch kennen, sondern einfach um Ausdruck und Sprachgebrauch und sowas..
Also ich poste einfach mal meine Übung zum Thema "Gründe warum Menschen arbeiten".
Everyone needs money every single day. Also nearly everyone have to work for it, except their name is Paris Hilton. But is money the only reason to go to work? I don't think so.
Doing a work you enjoy, gives your live a reason. Surly it would be nice to have nothing to do, except visiting friends, doing your hobby and watching TV the whole day... for a while. But it would get boring after some time and you would wish to have something useful to do which is fullfilling. Even if you had to get up early for your job, you would know, for what you're doing that.
Some people go to work, because they like it an enjoy doing their job. They like the people, they work with and the atmosphere, they work in. A nurse at the children's station for example likes to work with children every day. She likes to laugh with them and make their time in hospital mor comfortable and funny.
To sum up there are some reasons apart from money, why you work. The fewest people want to be like Paris Hilton, who isn't doing something useful at all. She's just partying every day and sings cruel songs. Maybe it would be much better, if she stopped working, for what ever reason.
Jetzt wollte ich mal ein wenig konstruktive Kritik hören. Negative, sowie positive 
Danke schonmal.
rolleyes
PS. Recht viel länger soll das ganze nicht sein 
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